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    The tips of the dawn race across the dark forests
    With rare light, unseen after Solomon's day;
    The glare softly kissed by a buffering mist
    Hastens the last of the darkness away.

    The sun staggers higher, glittering brighter,
    Climbing the rungs veiled by blankets of cloud.
    An era is born as the citizens mourn
    A dynasty ended beneath midnight's shroud.

    "Our king is no more!" the birds and bells cry,
    "This tragic May morning, the Thirteenth was found
    Asleep in his bed, heart still—he is dead!
    His son the Fourteenth is soon to be crowned!"

    The dauphin, age four, is soon made the king,
    Not ruling, but learning the ways of the land.
    Despite the French pride and potential inside
    He is powerless under his figurehead's hand.

    But powerlessness can never bar glory;
    The gleam of the sun is not stifled by haze.
    Mist melts to the ground and its rain makes a sound
    As it brushes gold harp strings: the sun's fiery rays.

    So the star blazes through with no wall in its way,
    Bathing the planet, its full glory shown.
    The torrent of light claims all say and all might
    To the king, twenty-three, who now governs alone.

    The noon will come shortly; the sun nears its zenith—
    Blood spills and wars rage for national glory.
    The citizens sing of the mighty Sun King
    Whose proud tales of victory fill song and story.

    But soon the storm clouds swarm in purple and gray;
    A painful cost comes when foes are to be slain.
    The bank is depleted for nations defeated
    And respect for the Sun King is lost in the rain.

    Night falls on the mountains like dry leaves in autumn.
    The day star finds rest for his weary warm head.
    The birds and bells cry as one sound in the sky,
    "Louis the Fourteenth, the Sun King, is dead."
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This is a poem I wrote about The Sun King, Louis XIV of France. It is based on his life and rule. He was only four years old when his father died, so he grew up learning how to be a king. He was powerless until he was twenty-three years old, when he claimed absolute power. At first, he was widely approved by the people. But his focus became winning glory for France. He waged wars to try to conquer many people, which brought a lot of debt and financial trouble to France. I tried to use the metaphor of a sun's "reign" over a day to illustrate his life.

This took me a very long time after lots of procrastination. I would love feedback and suggestions. Thanks!

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*Mutemouia Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's just wonderful ! :heart: I love the way you write ! :D
Thank you for this wonder ! :D :heart:

Can I add this wonderful poem in my group ?? It's a group about Louis XIV and his era :)
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:iconsirenightengale:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. Yes, of course you may use it--just cite me and send me the link, please. :D
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*Mutemouia Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just the truth ! :D The way you write is totally amazing ! :love: :heart:
I just wanna put it in my group here on DA ! :) :hug:
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:iconsirenightengale:
Thanks! :glomp: Yes, you can put it in your group :)
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*Mutemouia Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ! :D :hug: :tighthug: I just need you accept the request and it will be done ! :D :hug: :tighthug: I just want the members can read this wonder and leave you comments on your work! :heart: :) :hug:
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:iconsirenightengale:
Yep, I accepted. Thanks for doing this! :w00t:
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*Mutemouia Sep 5, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much !!! :D :D Aww thank you ! :blush: I thought it would be a good idea :) And your poem is such a wonder I will never tell this enough ! :D :heart:
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:icontherealjayremy:
This is great! I especially like the first two stanzas.
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:icontherealjayremy:
no problemo, tu eres muy esuela! :w00t: :w00t: <the w00t twins
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